I love your blurb. I stumbled on the change of tenses, but understand that awkwardness as your main character anticipates the upcoming events, and overcomes the "bright idea." I especially enjoy the last 2 words.
I love your blurb. I stumbled on the change of tenses, but understand that awkwardness as your main character anticipates the upcoming events, and overcomes the "bright idea." I especially enjoy the last 2 words.